Kia ora, my name is Hannah and I am a year 6 at Wainui Beach School in Gisborne, which is on the east coast of the North Island. I think that the design of your sky tower poster is really simple and the text is easy to read. The information on your poster is really relative to the sky tower. Next time you might want to try and use different sentence starters because you use “the” a lot in your information. I love you poster!! From Hannah!!
My name is Naomi, from Wainui Beach School Gisborne, New Zealand. I think this is awesome because you have added some really cool facts. Also some facts I didn’t even know before. I love going to the sky tower. This reminds me heights. Some feedforwards if you were doing this blog for international I would add New Zealand for example, The sky tower is in Auckland City, New Zealand. But if its a national blog I wouldn't add where The Sky Tower is since its well known. Then I would add a new fact. But tottaly up to you :)
Thanks Naomi, Here is a link to blog if you would like to write a comment. https://wbsnaomil.blogspot.com/
Hi, I'm Amelia I live in Gisborne NZ anD go to school a Wainui Beach School. i was really impressed by your blog post but Next time, you could maybe put a blurb at the top about what you were doing, and why you were doing it. Although I think you did a great job in telling me about the sky tower. I loved learning all those facts. Here is a link to my blog if you wanted to take a look at it... wbsameliaa.blogspot.com
Hi Te Raumati I am josefa i am writing from gisborne wainui school New zealand This is amazing because i did not know much about the Sky tower. Did you know you just told me lots about the Sky tower. Next time you could put a few more facts about the sky tower because some people already know that stuff. If you want to check on my blog i will give you the link. http://wbsjosefac.blogspot.com/2018/02/welcome-to-my-blog-2018.html
HI! I'm Dayna and I am writing to you from Wainui School in gisborne NZ, I like how you have shown some cool and fun facts about the sky tower I did not know that much about the sky tower, This reminded me about when I go to Auckland, Maybe you can tell us why you did this (facts About The Sky Tower) So why did you do this about the Sky Tower? BYE! :D
Hi, I’m Sofia from Wainui Beach School and our class was scrolling through twitter and found your awesome post about the Sky Tower!
I think it’s awesome that your talking about your home town's biggest tower!
Did you know the tower stands at 10,706 feet tall?! I’ve never been up there so I don’t know if it’s as high as it sounds! Maybe next time you could say who thought about making it and why it was built!?
Have you ever been up the Sky Tower? Great Work! -Sofia from WBS If you want to check out my blog here is a link http://wbssofiar.blogspot.com/2018/02/hi-my-name-is-sofia-i-am-year-6-at.html
Kia ora, my name is Hannah and I am a year 6 at Wainui Beach School in Gisborne, which is on the east coast of the North Island.
ReplyDeleteI think that the design of your sky tower poster is really simple and the text is easy to read. The information on your poster is really relative to the sky tower. Next time you might want to try and use different sentence starters because you use “the” a lot in your information.
I love you poster!!
From Hannah!!
Hi Te Raumati,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Naomi, from Wainui Beach School Gisborne, New Zealand.
I think this is awesome because you have added some really cool facts. Also some facts I didn’t even know before. I love going to the sky tower. This reminds me heights.
Some feedforwards if you were doing this blog for international I would add New Zealand for example, The sky tower is in Auckland City, New Zealand. But if its a national blog I wouldn't add where The Sky Tower is since its well known. Then I would add a new fact. But tottaly up to you :)
Thanks Naomi,
Here is a link to blog if you would like to write a comment.
https://wbsnaomil.blogspot.com/
Hi, I'm Amelia I live in Gisborne NZ anD go to school a Wainui Beach School. i was really impressed by your blog post but Next time, you could maybe put a blurb at the top about what you were doing, and why you were doing it. Although I think you did a great job in telling me about the sky tower. I loved learning all those facts.
ReplyDeleteHere is a link to my blog if you wanted to take a look at it...
wbsameliaa.blogspot.com
Hi Te Raumati
ReplyDeleteI am josefa i am writing from gisborne wainui school New zealand
This is amazing because i did not know much about the Sky tower.
Did you know you just told me lots about the Sky tower.
Next time you could put a few more facts about the sky tower because some people already know that stuff.
If you want to check on my blog i will give you the link.
http://wbsjosefac.blogspot.com/2018/02/welcome-to-my-blog-2018.html
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ReplyDeleteHI!
ReplyDeleteI'm Dayna and I am writing to you from Wainui School in gisborne NZ,
I like how you have shown some cool and fun facts about the sky tower I did not know that much about the sky tower,
This reminded me about when I go to Auckland,
Maybe you can tell us why you did this (facts About The Sky Tower)
So why did you do this about the Sky Tower? BYE! :D
Hi, I’m Sofia from Wainui Beach School and our class was scrolling through twitter and found your awesome post about the Sky Tower!
ReplyDeleteI think it’s awesome that your talking about your home town's biggest tower!
Did you know the tower stands at 10,706 feet tall?! I’ve never been up there so I don’t know if it’s as high as it sounds!
Maybe next time you could say who thought about making it and why it was built!?
Have you ever been up the Sky Tower?
Great Work!
-Sofia from WBS
If you want to check out my blog here is a link
http://wbssofiar.blogspot.com/2018/02/hi-my-name-is-sofia-i-am-year-6-at.html