LI:To create a poem imaging stepping on the moon
Today I have completed the second task for day 2. For this task I had to write a poem imaging me stepping on the moon. This task was difficult to complete because I had to try and write a short poem and instead of a long fiction story.
Kia ora Te Raumati
ReplyDeleteThis is a great poem I like the way you have added a picture of the moon and an astronaut to the left.
Keep up the great work
Molly
Kia ora Raumati,
ReplyDeleteHappy New Year! I’m really excited to be back to comment on your blog posts. What have you been up to during the holidays so far? So far I have been lucky enough to have a nice holiday at Lake Rotoiti and in Tauranga with my whanau.
Wowee what a beautiful poem! I really like how you have inserted your text onto a picture, it looks amazing. I love the simile you used when you said, ‘Space is like a deserted island’ because it really made me imagine what the moon might look like if I were to set foot onto it. You have done so well writing a small poem because sometimes it can be really hard to write something short that can still capture people’s eyes or at least their attention.
Did you draw this picture yourself? If you didn’t, please remember to attribute images that you get from the internet. This is when you say where you got your photos from. Here is the link if you don't know how.
We give out full marks when you attribute your photos!
https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1VKjkMGwBrk2YI6Vtmg91OAQljr_T3ZSV6YZtu6MWFNM/edit#slide=id.g2c4e689b11_0_0
Look forward to reading more of your mahi!
Ngā mihi,
Mani
Hi Te Raumati!
ReplyDeleteThis activity you did was great, Great job for staying active with the Summer Learning Journey! What was the hardest part of this activity?
Blog you later!
~ Florence